It turns out to be a pretty good story. And now, the gin-influenced part of my brain is doing a victory dance and insisting on buying a round for everyone. Jun 14, Liz rated it it was amazing. The best I have read in many years. If you're a parnormal or vamp fan, you MUST get acopy of this. Can't wait to see what McAfee writes next! I am a definite fan. Aug 28, Laura rated it liked it Shelves: This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here. I really wasn't sure whether I was going to like this book or not, up until the very end.
I had seen this story described as a sort of vampire romance, which is initially what drew me to it. It's not though, at least not by any definition of romance I have.
There was a problem filtering reviews right now. Twenty-five years later, a previously unknown copy was found in an attic in Seattle whe Robert M Blevins, author of the sci-fi adventure novels 'The Corona Incident,' and 'The 13th Day of Christmas,' offers up the book that first brought attention to his work. NOT Edward Cullen though , but it was refreshing to see the process as Vincent changes from the man he was into the monster he is. But he is beginning to like the growing evil inside him. Aug 16, Lon Casler Bixby rated it really liked it.
I never believed that Vincent really loved Raine; he barely knew her. In lust with her?
Affected by vampire attraction mind control or something? In love with her?
Not by my definition of the word. I I really wasn't sure whether I was going to like this book or not, up until the very end. Not believing that he loved her, I'm not sure the ending had quite the emotional impact it might have otherwise, but I do really like how we see that Vincent, as a vampire, is a monster. He's not the man he was when he was a alive.
I love vampires with souls on occasion Angel, Spike NOT Edward Cullen though , but it was refreshing to see the process as Vincent changes from the man he was into the monster he is. I had some problems with the storytelling in places, but for me, the ending made up for them.
The story is told in first person. I know that really turns some people off, so be forewarned. I'm not usually a first person kind of girl, but it didn't bother me in this case. I know other people really love that, so, if you're one who loves it, this book might be right up your alley. I had some formatting weirdness, but it was limited to a handful of places in the book. Jul 27, Maria rated it it was ok. This was offered as a free eBook on amazon. I love the Twilight Series but haven't gotten into any other vampires books.
However, if you're looking for another vampire love story like Twilight, this isnt the one. I didn't much care for it really.
The author spent a lot of time in Vincent's head and painted the scenes in so much detail to where you could most likely see them in your mind. It was too wordy in my opinion. It seemed to be This was offered as a free eBook on amazon. It seemed to be drawn out for the firs half of the book but then the end was rather abrupt. I simply felt like there was not enough action for me during the fight scene. I read through it quickly and found myself feeling that there should be some thing more.
What I did like about this book was that it told the story of the Bachyir vampire race, the history and even the process of turning. I rather enjoyed Ramah's tale to Vincent of how he came to be the 2nd on the Council. Good story within another story. Too bad we never heard his side of the Sanders story, we had to hear Sanders point of view. Although I guess that explains why he was reluctant to tell it to Vincent.
All in all, not too shabby for the author's first book Those who are familiar with David's 33 A. It's the tale of a young man transformed into a vampire, or Bachyr, and then abandoned by the one who turns him. Vincent is smitten by Raine, who feels the same level of passion for him. Her desire becomes his undoing when she bites him during a moment of intimacy.
Knowing it's against the rules to Tur Those who are familiar with David's 33 A. Knowing it's against the rules to Turn someone without the consent of the Council of Thirteen, she flees. Vincent, only half-way transformed, soon falls into the clutches of the Council. They complete his transformation and tell him they'll let him live if he brings Raine to them so she can be punished.
Vincent's journey and ultimate destination makes for an interesting and compelling story. I enjoyed both this new story and the new information revealed about the infamous Council of Thirteen that was first introduced in 33 A. The writing style is very natural and Vincent's plight will keep you turning the page ummm Dec 28, Scott Collins rated it really liked it.
If you've read 33AD, you'll recognize some of the names when you read this book. If you haven't, don't worry, this book is just fine as a stand alone story.
Follow the story of a man, your average joe, who happens into the wrong bar on the wrong night. Follow him on his journey into the darkness as he falls in love with the mysterious and beautiful Raine and becomes one of The Chosen. Watch as he struggles with what is right and the hunger that won't be ignored. I liked the rapid pace and nonstop action. That said, I'd recommend Saying Goodbye to the Sun to those who enjoy a good bloody vampire book. David McAfee is one to watch.
McAfee does a fine job in explaining his vampire world: It is a little different than others, so it made the trip worth it. I would say it is a great read for vampire fans, no doubt. May 22, Johnnie Howze rated it liked it. More vampire info to add to that which gained from movies and other sources This novel entertaining and short as it is should be required reading before Bram Stoker's great classic or Stephen King's Salem's Lot. True horror fans know whereof I speak. Feb 03, David Whitehurst rated it really liked it. This review contains no spoilers.
There are plenty of surprises in the book though! Vincent sees a girl in a bar and feels a connection, like an invisible string binding them; he thinks she is the kind of girl that would never go out with him. The evening was wonderful until she backed away from him shaking her head, then turned and ran out This review contains no spoilers. The evening was wonderful until she backed away from him shaking her head, then turned and ran out the door.
She surprises him by reappearing in front of him, giving him a kiss, telling him to run and then disappearing again. Vincent decides to stakeout the bar where he met Raine. After three days he finally spots her, she is running from someone. Now he needs answers. Why were they after her?
Why was she running from Vincent? She told him she was running from him because she was trying to protect him from herself. In a heated moment of passion, she bites Vincent. This is their story. Kindle Edition , pages. Published first published August 31st To see what your friends thought of this book, please sign up. To ask other readers questions about Say Goodbye to the Sun , please sign up.
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Jan 21, Julie rated it liked it. Pretty good hard scifi adventure about a decades-long mission to send a colony ship to a new world. Of course disaster strikes and the mission becomes a fight for survival. Not much character building but pretty solid adventure and plausible science. Ivan rated it really liked it Jan 13, Pedro rated it really liked it Jul 16, Frank rated it liked it Sep 06, Raine is being pursued by other vampires and after partially-turning Vincent, she disappears.
In McAfee's world, vamps aren't allowed to be made without approval from the Council of 13 and Raine didn't get permission. The Council, in a rare move, decides to finish turning Vincent instead of killing him and sends him out to capture Raine. The plot moves right along, while giving the reader detailed information on what constitutes the powers of vampires and their history. If anything, I thought the book was a little short.
Saying Goodbye to the Sun - Kindle edition by David McAfee. Download it once and read it on your Kindle device, PC, phones or tablets. Use features like. Saying Goodbye to the Sun has ratings and 37 reviews. Stacey said: Being a glutton for punishment, and sometimes lacking what little sense I was born.
He could have taken this storyline and doubled it, I wouldn't have been the least bit disappointed. I am eagerly looking forward to the sequel to 33 A. Well, Saying goodbye to the Sun was my first Kindle Book. I really enjoyed the new experience, reading an e-reader is great. Now about the book: I haven't read any previous works from Mr. McAfee, so I have to judge his writing based on this one.
It is a very visual novel. You could almost see Vincent and the Council lurking in the shadows. I think it would make a very good B vampire movie. Although I like books written in first person, this formula does not quite work very well at some points in the narrative. There is not much characters development, except for Vincent, and his not-very-credible love for Raine.
It just doesn't feel real at all. There are not much details about the time when the story is taking place. The 80's come on! There is much more plenty of information about the 80's than Lady in Red that is no present here. Or at least I didn't feel like I was in that particular decade. The characters motivations sometimes fall weak, like if they were mended to proceed with the main story. I also felt like there are gaps in the story. Things that took place that needed to be explained in more detail. By the end of the book you feel like if you have miss part of it, and just accept what the writer tells you.
Mmm, does not work for me. A nice book to spend time, but nothing to create everlasting memories. Maybe I will read Mr. McAffe's other book about the Bachyr, 33 A. I hope that one to be more cautivating, but I have my doubts. See all 44 reviews. Amazon Giveaway allows you to run promotional giveaways in order to create buzz, reward your audience, and attract new followers and customers. Learn more about Amazon Giveaway. Saying Goodbye to the Sun. Set up a giveaway. What other items do customers buy after viewing this item?